Writing a Personal Narrative for Kids - Episode 4: Writing a Draft
Add a moment where the character talks to themselves or a pet to show their internal stress.
If you are working on this for a class or personal project, here are some tips for adding more detail:
Describe the smell of the overheating electronics or the cold sweat on the character's palms.
Since I can't see the video, I’ve drafted a detailed story based on a used in many educational writing modules: a "Small Moment" story featuring a clear conflict and resolution. The Midnight Glitch

